Oh my...now that is HILARIOUS. HAHA great job! I absolutely love it!!

Hahahaahahaah, I have not laughed so much for a long time

It's a minor spoiler, but a spoiler just the same. You could fix that so easily just by taking "In book three,..." out of your summary.

Thanks for considering others.

That wasm fun! I enjoyed the little twist in your story and that you stayed true to Lawrence's relatonship with Temeraire as Novik has established it. Those characters really are too much fun and you've done them justice. Thank you!

When I read "you smell of Emily" I knew at once this must be AgiVega. As always, it's great.

Nice fanfic again :)