 applesauce.the.brave 2009-11-22 . chapter 4please oh please update, the waiting kills me. |
 foxyaoi123 2009-11-17 . chapter 5well thats not good poor Arthur oh plzs tell me he's not going to go all emo be/c that would make me so sad |
 foxyaoi123 2009-11-17 . chapter 4wow just wow love it so far |
 applesauce.the.brave 2009-11-01 . chapter 5oh i want confrontation! |
 Andreaeb182 2009-11-01 . chapter 5OMG Poor Arthur... i would be completly heartbroken at that time... but i can't blame Francis, Jean is so hot... i prefer brunnette ones (it has a relation with mi fixation with Greece and Spain xD)
I hope he could end with Francis in a not so bad/good way.
I can't wait for the next chapter... seeing you soon
Andrea |
 LithiumKiss 2009-11-01 . chapter 5:O wow, that guy is a hottie and in my mind Jean looked a little different but now that I think about it, Jean looking that way in my head seems just about right.
Poor Arthur. Awesome update. Looking forward to the next :D |
 Kami011 2009-10-31 . chapter 5STOP HURTING ARTHUR'S FEELINGS! ;~;
Poor Arthurr!! i want to hug him NOW!
please, update!
i'm loving this fic! ;D |
 pmpatg 2009-10-31 . chapter 5Arthur~ TwT
You poor little...*huggles* |
 Arkhadiam 2009-10-18 . chapter 3Brilliant. I love this kind of plot -nations falling in love with humans- and jealous!England. Makes me think a lot about certain ladies (Elizabeth I and Jeanne D`Arc).
Well, congrats!
PS: BTW... mi sister (french) says that salaud means more like "**" or "**" for men. Hope this help you ^^ |
 LithiumKiss 2009-10-16 . chapter 3So dramatic :D
In the words of Sealand, jerk England! Jealousy is an ugly feeling the brings the worst out in everybody. I really enjoyed these two chapters, and I gotta say, GO CANADA, EH! Good little man for standing up to Arthur. Still, Arthur is a favourite character of mine and you write him being a bastard and otherwise really well.
Babelfish is a good translation site if you wanted to use that instead of google. ^^ |
 Hunter-chan 2009-10-16 . chapter 3omg!
Arthur, don't cry!
Gah! ç_Ç
Why Fracis isn't there to hug him??! TT^TT
more more more! |
 the cheshire brat 2009-10-16 . chapter 3AW! D': |
 applesauce.the.brave 2009-10-15 . chapter 1ooh, i like where this is going. oh francis, loving a human is a silly idea. |
 LithiumKiss 2009-10-15 . chapter 1Haha, I'm totally pimping your stories here, but I have good reason to. They are just full of awesomeness.
It's really strange.. OC's usually frustrate the heck out of me but for some reason, yours doesn't. He isn't boring and is quite likable, and I like how you didn't spend paragraphs upon paragraphs trying to describe him either.
I'm anticipating the following chapter very much. I know it'll be great. :3 |
 Tree Flower 2009-10-10 . chapter 1Hohoo~ I like the sound of this story~ France falling in love, and England jealous? Hohohoho I sense drama or something like that. Can't wait for more~ |