In my last review that was suppose to be "punch" not "bunch". >.>

Over all this is a very good story and funny. Like I said before, I have never watched this show because I guess I am lame, but still this story was funny. Never pay attention to any haters. I have read more than this story of yours and your writing style is different, yes, but your stories pack a bunch that most writers don't. So I do hope to read more from you.

hahaha if i was him i would guess matsuda first also-this was so funny

Write stories like this again, or you shall meet the same fate as Aiziwa. I Demand it! DEMAND I say!

Meh. The ending wasn't as bad as you made it out to be. Woo! Go, L plushies! I want one.
C.

The best chapter Ever! *w*
Sorry it took me so long to review this, I had no idea there was another chapter up. Ha Ha!

Anyway, I have to say that this chapter is one of my favorites,
it made me laugh the entire time I was reading it (Like all the other ones do). Hope you update soon!

AWESOMEST STORY EVER!

“FALCON PUNCH!” Light yelled and punched the detective.

MAHAHA THIS IS THE BEST LINE EVAH! THAT'S WHY I LUV CRACKFICS LIKE THIS ONE! Great job!

Add more grammar.
Better writing.
More random humor. (because it is funny, just...could be better)

And the result will be awesome! 8D

This was one of the best chapters. I loved Rainbow bright Matsuda, and the L plushies feedig off Aizawa, and crazy pregnant Sayu.

I want some more of Light, now that he's liberated in his sexuality. XD

That bald man must be one of those men that scream when they see a mouse.
Good chapter by the way. Haha I'm still trying to picture a near plushie in a tutu! xD

Since I'm a perv, can you go into details about what all the noise was? *Wink* :'3

Poor Mikami. :[
(I don't feel sorry for Takada... She's a **)

*Gasp*
You should put BB in here. That would be awesome!
Anyway, Lovely chapter. Can't wait for the next update.

Dude, seriously...I may not follow Death Note but this is funny. I wish you would write more. Especially the line, "Whatever my ** itches," made me burst out laughing. XD

Aw, now all we need is some honeymoon action. *Wink* *Wink*
:'D

The priest was epic (though he only had on line),
and the plushies were cute as hell. <3

Update soon!

Haha. Light is a d0uche.

We need honey moon action. Or at least sort of honey moon action. Sayu wants.

I would also like to know about how Matsuda and Light are doing with their relatiobship. XD

Oh my gosh, this fanfic is so friggin' funny x'D
Can't wait for the next chapter!