This is such a beautiful oneshot. I love Raiden; and he goes through so much, and it's easy to know that he'll have a lot of trouble adjusting to a normal life.

You write as him perfectly. So much in fact that I was a little teary at the end! I'm such a loser, lol.

Great Story!

BlacAngel.

That's so sad... It covers that part about Snake dying and trying to help Jack out even while he's dying...

This story was incredible! This is a symbol that the MGS fandom has been improving in quality. It's actually inspired me to write my own MGS fic with Raiden in it.

Great Job!

Boss