That was good. I'm glad she survived.

Nice story, liked the alternate plot line. I have some stylistic suggestions though, namely use fewer italics and drop the bold altogether. Italics tend to lose their power if they're used every other sentence and boldface is pretty much never used in professional fiction because it's overly dramatic and takes away from the story. Otherwise, interesting read.

Amazing story. I was shock when I saw the blood on JJ, I also thought she was shot... It's nice to see what might have happened if she was shot. Great job!

Aw! The end was so cute! You should do more like that :D