Gah, that little author excerpt at the end...was somehow depressing. In a lovely, thought provoking way, but damn.

This story is...just really amazing. It ties in all sorts of possibilities and the consequences of Vayne's powers. But Jesse's death...it's like a lose-lose situation isn't it? Well, either way, this is a wonderful fic.

wow, love it

I swear, you and Execharmonious keep tempting me to write that long chaptered fic that I have all the notes -and plot- for but haven't actually started.

I think this is my favorite, by the way, partly because it covers what I really think happened after the game. Nice work, thank you for writing it.

Chaos

Nice story! Hope you will write Mana Khemia fic more!