Ahhh this was great!
Hey, you guys should add another chapter cause I really want to know what happens next haha. Well whatever you two do, you write fantastically, so keep it up! 3

damn i so wish there was more that was hot

This was terrible... i don't think i've cried so hard in my whole life... sequal? please? they have to get together! i'll even write you a sequal if you want! ahh i need more! nobu needs to realize that shin is his true looooove! *cries*

Well... that was... ehm... really, um... *good*, actally. i liked it.

wow.. that was actually pretty sad. I loved it though. I wish there were more Shin x Nobu fanfics that are as good as this one.

The angst was perfect. Very well done, especially if you don't know Shin as well as if you had had the chance to read further in the manga. The only thing that bothered me was the lack of lube-no matter how "used" to it a person might be, it would still be extremely painful, even more so since Shin usually services women. Overall, great job. I certainly enjoyed this piece.

ROFL. I guess I wasnt suppossed to read this? well fine! I shall take my reviews elsewhere! lol not the right elizabeth tho. It wasnt bad especially if you dont know Shin. I love Shin&Nobu :D

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This is so sad!

Wonderful, it really gets to me.

I feel so bad for Shin. That's my love right there. It's all stupid Hachi's fault smh

This was so beautiful! I almost cried for Shins unearthly sorrow! Please, do more like these! Keep up the good work! :3

hello my dear we did quite nicely did we not? well i thin you did a wonderful job of finishing it off and its ending has inspired me to write another one i look forward to working with you again loves yous!

but but but my name is elizabeth do i count?

Finally! Another good ShiNobu fic. I've waited so LOONG! Anyways, it was brilliant, do another. PWEASE? And I Like Shinnichi as seme (ONTOP!). Nobu-chan is uke!

I reread it. And I like it. Although it gives me sadface.

Doesn't it really depend on how attractive the guy with long hair is though? I'm not sure I'm in to the superlong hair if the guy is seriously ugly you know?

Then again, haven't read Nana.

BUT ANYWAY.

POOR SHIN. POOR NOBU.

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