awesome story! thz for taking your time to write it! I really liked it.

I finally found out what happened here baby sis', good ending for your story.

Although making me wait wasn't very nice at all, but I guess you are forgiven.

Are you going to do a sequel or not?

i only 2 chapters in, her sayian parents died in a car crash? that pretty stupid to be honest, people get put through mountains in dbz and survive

Nice story

I was long waiting foy you.

And want to say thank you.

soph-chan! I just love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! And all you have to do is write about two more chapters and an epilogue...well...what are you waiting for...go on...write it. *Sets up camp outside Soph's bedroom door* you aren't going anywhere till you finish!

And where's your other Mystical Mirage Story? You better finish that one too!

Love,

Egg Drop Soup

Sophia?

I'm not too sure if this is the Sofia that I know. If it is... Hey!

update, update, update, update, please

awsome write more chapters please!

Wow aside from few minor mistakes with spelling this is a very good fic. Keep up he good work. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. :)

I finally get around to reviewing this one! You've got a great story here Sophie. I really like it. Keep it up and write the next chapter, you hear? I wanna find out what happens next. _

that was a fantastic story and please continue

Well you see the story was good but you made Vegeta look like a dumbass! well the story was okay except that even when Vegeta, Goku and everyone else could read power levels without scouters could not read Taliyah and Jutus' power level . Well I suggest that you make Vegeta show his hidden power or do what you want.

_ Way to go Sophie! That's the spirit _ This is a cool story, and no one wants to see you give up on it - i think it's a great story right from the beginning, though you are right, it does get better ; Keep writing chicka, and I'll talk to ya on the holidays some time!

I stopped reading after the second chapter because all this is, is another pointless Mary Sue fic. Please, first your new character is as strong as everybody else, without nobody finding out about it, she goes off and has a large supply of senzu beans, beans that need special handling to grow, otherwise Korin wouldn't be the only one who grows them, and then you have Trunks acting like she needs to be protected, even though only another one of his friends/family would be able to be a threat to her.

This would have been interesting, and I would have continued reading, if you had her, either through coincidence or detective work, to meet up with Trunks and Goten, and have them train a weak fighter like her into their level. Without amazing computer hacking skills, fields of senzu beans, and having her be equal in strength and power as the rest. One of the many ways this fic can get worse, is if you had her turn Super Sayajin, which should be impossible, since if she did so, then Trunks and everyone else would have felt her power level when she transformed. But considering how bad this fic is, character and storyline, then I wouldn't be too surprised if she could.

Oh yeah, your grammar, spelling, and punctuation was pretty good though. That's really about the only good thing I could see.