I loved the commentary that went along with this story! It's interesting to read what you think about your creation.
I thought the ending was utterly perfect for what they shared, but a part two is very much welcomed!

I was like: Is she belly-dancing? It reminded me of this class next door to my yoga class that could move their stomach muscles in crazy ways!
Severus wonder at her "muggle" terminology was pretty funny. Like him wondering at her calling him baby lol

Now that I think about it, it would be hard to transition from poetry to writing, especially when writing in free verse... I never really thought about it.
I remember by first attempt at fanfiction... complete and utter disaster! I am terrifically glad that I didn't post mine!

Whoa...
I think it would be strange reading about a less endowed Snape, and slightly comical... Would you really ever write him with a regular size? It seems weird...
Ah, Snape love. When reading a story about him being his regular snarky self to the tenth power in bed is utterly perfect. I think I'm still stuck there! lol

lool...i just read this part:
"And now, it was standing at attention awaiting Hermione’s arrival like an honor guard. Cursing, he wrestled with positioning it, finally settling on a horizontal position, tucked in the elastic waistband to hold it in place.

He looked at his clock. It read five minutes to three."

..and you were writing all about his member before that..so what I realy read was:

"He looked at his **. It read five minutes to three."

HUH?? lol, I had a good laugh when I noticed my mistake :D

PS: by the way it is a very interesting question who started the whole idea of revels with muggle killings and rapes. They realy are a part of nearly every fic involving Death Eater action...

Thatwas your first lemony scene? wow! I remember this being the first of your fics I read a year or two ago and it made me a total addict to your writing :D. I was just about to start reading the sequel to this and decided to reread the whole story first. I am still loving it the second time around!

nice

Wow Ms-Figgie, I think you knocked more than my socks off with this one! Please don't ever curtail your wonderful descriptive abilities. For a blind reader such as myself, every delicious descriptive word is like music to my ears. A picture may mean a thousand words, but descriptive words bring solid form to words that flow seductively from a descriptive writer's pen. As always, keep that mues of your's happy.

hello. this was really awsome. unfortunatly, my story has nothing sexual, but your welcome to read it. when they were 'eating' i couldn't tell if that was some long ** food metaphore, or they were actually eating breakfast. sorry if they were really eating, but after reading chapter 9 i guess i just have sex on the mind.

The internal dialogues are amazing. Powerful language beautifully written. Well done!

Simply Amazing! wow you have a wonderful talent! Im speechless OMG i cant wait to read part to which i will be starting in a second!! lol

HOT DAMN!
THAT
WAS
CRAZY!
...great
BUT CRAZY

Had moxy kid! Had moxy! lol
Nowadays, review rain on through lol! Wow. Yesterday this story had like thirty review and now it had forty-three!

LMAO Fantasy! Snape sounds about right... Poor Hermione, being driven mad with lust... I'm kind of laughing, can you tell?
Seriously though. It would have made me laugh if one of the Gryffindor boys had taken it upon themselves to give her the right shagging she wanted... And Severus being left without his cherry... Ah the irony. But then, it wouldn't be SSHG! And that would suck... actually, maybe not, depending on the Gryffindor lol