Oh **! Someone kidnapps Akiko! That's a major turn! But Who? And How did they find Jupiter's indentity?
Luckily, Michiru has wisdow for 2 'cause with Haruka, Aki would be dead. But would it be a bad thing?
Great job!

Talk about an evil cliffhanger o.O I commend you on the usual: perfect character descriptions and interactions, solid plot build-up, and just the right touch of emotion and tension to keep the story afloat. Love it. Update soon! ^^
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Oh wow.. That was an unexpected turn of events.. I wonder why they would want Sailor Jupiter... Whoa this can't end good for the kidnaper.. what are they stupid the senshi faced people that could do magic.. do they think they stand a chance hidding behind a child ?? Update soon please... Great work...

I fear the worst. Haruka is so violent when it comes to her loved one. I hope Michiru can stop her. Great job!

Every action have consequences. Good and bad. Great job and have a nice day.

oh my, i can´t stop laughing! I know the person on the phone was Usagi and i guess the other was Rei, am i right? Great story!

Hahaha. Oh, Usagi. I giggled at her "mysterious" phone call. Quite intrigued to see what she'll concoct next to get her father back in the business. Wonder who the "demon" will be?

THinks are not looking good int he Tenoh house. Junko should really let people help her. And a daaughtr's love has no bounds, And I love Makoto children parts. So cute. Great job and have a nice day.

It's funny how makoto has difficulties to let her little girl go to pre-school. A child's trauma?
I'm ok with Gert. This man is right. What will Aki do to Junko if not stop? He 's really mad and he could do something very bad to Junko or her family.
Great job!

I hope Junko can speak to one of the other girls before this gets out of hand.

And the plot thickens! Poor Kenji... poor Junko. Anxiously awaiting your update!

Thats does not sound good. Great job and have a nice day.

i love junko! But the boy doesn't seem to understand it's over. Great job!

Akinori was lucky to have a second chance. Too bad, he has just wasted it! Great job!

*Happy sigh* This is seriously like watching a true episode. Every character is flawlessly spot-on down to the most minute detail. *Bravo!* Please update again soon; I really enjoyed chapter 4!