Funny little tidbit, in the original eroge Rathty is female and is Arawn's wife just like Octavia, Limwris, Rhiannon, Epona, Erimin, Morgan and Llyr. Arthur is woman-less and is a bit of a sis-con anyway. Just thought I would mention that your story is made out of bad assumptions and retarded anime producers wreaking the original source material. Not your fault I blame the irresistible lust for money that most people have, anyway cheer up life is good and all that jazz, see ya.

You were writing this for your girlfriend? Well, in a way I can admire your resolve. A pity that it seems you broke up. I hope you patch up !

As for the story, everyone is now so OOC that I just don't think I can take any more of it.

-chronodekar

Ok... definitely OOC.

-chronodekar

A bit too WAFFY for my tastes. Either that, or I was expecting something else.

-chronodekar

please finish!

you gonna finish this?

hi

you have a good story ... please update soooon

This is soooo CUTE! i swear! and i hope Hannah forgives you! and i love your quotes. .

Dammit still ended up laughing man it way too funny!

This chapter really funny.

Update soon

Naughty and hilarious.

Quite long and most of the characters are there.

Good job.

Love this chappter

Update soon

Yup...long enough...and satisfying. Nice touch in adding ogam and the rest, though Arthur seem unsure of himself.

Update soon and hope their "relationship" progresses...

I dont know why but I started laughing at the end of the chapter Update sooner please!

Great story, Hope you continue on with it, I love both the game and the anime but it irritates me how Arthur is overlooked by every female in both the show and game so its nice to see Octavia take interest in him.