are you going to continue this? this world you've created seems a hell of a lot more interesting than the plain old regular naruto verse, a bit more like Inuyasha to be honest, and i'd love to see how they'd take care of the baby-or not.

"I'll tie him down and you stab him!" Uzumaki-san hissed.

LOL!Wish their was more but at least there was a second chapter.

MORE! i want to know what happens next! :-)

And now I'm imagining the fiasco that will occur when they get back to Konoha... Make that fiascos, plural. *heh heh heh*

This is why one should never call on strange deities. They'll always manage to twist things around in the most unexpected way. (Seriously, I've read enough folk tales and so to recognized that.)

Oh this one is fun!

You tease. This isn't complete at all. :(

Nice.

Is there a Part III?

...that's IT? Come ON! It so good, and the writing style is pretty good for the most part. Why aren't you continuing this?

This is a pretty interesting concept, with a very unique setup. Maybe you could come back to it and write some more?

Fate: Problem ninjas? *trollface*

More ? I has cookies

Ah! You're perfect! Why don't you write longer stories?

Seriously, I read Will of Foxfire and another one of your oneshots and ... you could expand any one of these

this is a really good mini-story! i think you should totally continue on it even though you put it as 'completed'. i'd like to read the process on how minato and kushina develop their relationship from here and raise naruto up!

Please continue, this is pure awesomness

Haha!

Jiraiya is a complete idiot when it ones to babies.. xD

I liked the mini backstory to Minato and Kushina's life.

:)