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Polaris'05
2009-10-26 . chapter 3
Oh... Donny... I'll be your friend! That poor guy, life's being kinda rough on him right now. I wanna give him huge hugs! I can see how seeing that jacket would freak him out, though. He shoulda said something to Raph, at least then they would've understood why it bothered him.

Polaris
Effar
2009-10-26 . chapter 3
Bawahaha - you know I still love this look into Don's mind. Great reactions/communications with April, too - people tend to either downplay their connection or overplay it too much. YOU DO IT JUST RITE.

Like Goldilocks.

And now I sound creepy.

Keep it up, TF! I expect to see this finished WITHIN THE MONTH. Not really. XD Though I'm quite sure you can pull it off, no problem. You crazy writer person you.
Effar
2009-10-10 . chapter 1
B'aw, you are most welcome my friend. I'm just glad I get the know-how on things before other people. Makes me feel important and what-not.

I'm not sure if I've mentioned it or not, but the prelude is SUCH A GOOD IDEA, I think. It really eases into the whole Baby Bro story and everything - love it.

Can't wait for more~
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