 LalaMoped 2009-10-11 . chapter 1This was really good. From the summary, it looks kind of scary, but once you read it, it makes sense. I think ShikaTema fans are intimidated by seeing Shikamaru with anyone other than Temari (I'm guilty, I know it), but your point of view is probably completely right. My favorites were Shiho and Tenten (I especially liked the NejiTen thrown in there ^__^ ).
All in all, it was very well thought out and written, and I am adding it to my favorites!
~LM |
 P.O.J.A 2009-10-10 . chapter 1you just gotta love your subconscious after writing such a piece of genius! I love the concept of him dating other girls, and the time lines you placed them in. Also the lessons he learned from each experience was true to the nature of the characters involved. Sneaking in Naruto like that was BRILLIANT and most hilarious, and having his first sensual experience with Ten Ten seemed most plausible and quite frankly hot! But my fav of all came in the end when Temari said "ok" to his date request...i love a good happy ending!
Another amazing notch on your belt of superb drabbles. Keep it up Jakia I truly enjoy your creative work.
Sincerely,
P.O.J.A ^_^ |