. . . . . . . . that was AWESOME! Love that imagery. Definitely filled with sexiness.

Oh, Part 2, Part 2 please please Part 2, pretty please!

this was a fun little story. sexy too. but unless there's a baby that you didn't mention, river would be the youngest. not second youngest. =)

Who needs a bowl or a spoon with Jayne as a much sexier dinnerware alternative?!

Seriously, I really enjoyed reading this and especially liked how River was able to work away at Jayne's tough exterior and get him to open up to her about his family and experiences growing up. Everyone needs someone, and these two are perfect for each other!

Can't wait to read the next installment!

This is a fun read. Lots of chuckle places. Your dialogue was completely in character. I liked the chorused "I'll be in my bunk", Simon fainting, and of course all the ice cream moments. Very well-written and funny.