Nothing fancy, just a day in the life, I like it. You keep the characters completely canon and you do it with your own writing energy.

It's a very "Nita/Kit" friendship moment and for a really simple conflict (if you can call mud that and I believe you can because it can be very problematic, ha, ha) you do it justice without going overboard.

Excellent work! I look forward to more of your one-shots!

-Don "QuixoticQuest" ^_^

Adorable and very much in character. You really do seem to able to capture the characters in very short glimpses.

That was cute, in a pointless and amusing way. I approve!

Yes, it's very dirty. Or muddy.
Cute! I'm sure the Manuals love to brag about themselves, though.