 Konoha's White Fang 2009-10-30 . chapter 1I don't know what to feel, I was smiling like an idiot until the ending, did he smack her or was by mistake, I really can't tell. My eyes were about to come out of their sockets when I read the almost last line. But I could tell you that even now I'm smiling like an idiot.
~KWF~ |
 shadowanime1 2009-10-20 . chapter 1nice story, i enjoyed reading it. |
 tsissa 2009-10-11 . chapter 1the ending was funny XD |
 Ruffian194 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Aw. I really liked this one. It was cute. |
 policegirl 2009-10-11 . chapter 1 It's definitely well written and quite amusing. Looking forward to reading more from you specially a multichapter fic. You should try because talent for writing you definitly have |
 KawaiiKittyChan 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Haha, Alucard is so sweet, so careing and bold so... Well actually none of that. so this story depicted him quite perfectly, short but sweet. A wonderful little drabble, although what does Rating:G mean? |
 Luna-noya-na 2009-10-11 . chapter 1The story (even if it's short) was very good.I was really enjoying it when BAM that awful smacking part!I didn't like it,just because I'm sure that Alucard would not smack a girl.He is a No-life-king he wouldn't be king for nothing,ne?And he IS a gentleman...so kind of that little thingy spoiled the story...but just for a smal part...everything else is good.
Nice work! |
 Lara 2009-10-11 . chapter 1 Wondefull chapter! It had me on the edge of my seat the whole time!! Damn Alucard a gentleman dosn´t hit in a woman but I guess he´s not a gentlemen. Please write more of this. Thank you.
Alucard and Seras forever |
 Angel Reaper 2009-10-10 . chapter 1^^ Lovely drabble, it made me feel a bit warm and fuzzy... good work! |
 Valentine Phantomhive 2009-10-10 . chapter 1Poor Seras... She got hit in the face... |