 Jinxauthor Mel 2009-11-19 . chapter 1This was a cool little adventure (pun intended) and I love it!
I was so afraid you might make Rodney lose the ZPM or have John decide to throw it away so he could better maneuver his dazed friend, but thank God you kept the man sane! ^^"
It's also great you kept everything open in the end, so when the movie finally comes, maybe I can just pretend this really happened in between. ^^ |
 voyfan7 2009-10-18 . chapter 1And what, may I ask, is wrong with an entire season of Rodney centric whump stories? I was totally thinking of Aladdin earlier when the room started to shake, but then thought I was just weird. Hehe, would not be the first time I was called weird. I can totally see why Rodney would be worried about the team being split-up if Atlantis stayed on Earth, but the IOA would really be stupid to take him away - nobody knows that city as well as he does. (or can fix it in 10 seconds either) Loved seeing Rodney break down a little and admit his fears for once, it was a very real moment there. I think it helps to show just how far Rodney has come since we first saw him in SG1. *sigh*, I love these stories... :) |
 jd 2009-10-16 . chapter 1 this is stupid |
 Blue Shadowdancer 2009-10-15 . chapter 1Nice story! Bit reckless of Rodney, but then he does at times have a tendancy to get so focused on one thing that he forgets everything else (such as all the other equipment, which could have had the potential to be more useful than a ZPM!)
I also really liked the idea of Atlantis's arrival triggering something else Ancient on Earth, that was great! And I'm not surprised that Rodney somehow managed to blame John for the Chair being destroyed ;)
And I liked too the uncertainty about their future, and how Rodney so desperately wanted everything to stay just as it had been in Pegasus. Glad that Jeannie's happy for him and Jennifer, too :) |
 Shadows-of-Realm 2009-10-14 . chapter 1I liked the story!! How about a sequel to it, :grin! |
 ElisaD263 2009-10-12 . chapter 1Finally got a chance to read this new story!!
Loved it! Story starts where the show ended..yay!!
A power reading from a base near Antarctica...you know that John and Rodney would have to be ones to go check it out! It was great to have Rodney in that orange fleece...thanks! ^_^
And then what happens...they find a room full of "Ancient devices and doodads." I could see Rodney's eyes!
"If Rodney was already dead then all the possessions in the room and the whole universe would become meaningless and pointless to him forevermore." - Aww..love that!
Another great story!! Well written and fun to read! Thanks! Looking forward to your next one! |
 loveaminals 2009-10-11 . chapter 1I am enjoying this story. Please keep up the good work. |
 RodneyIsGodney 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Oh, very good Varda! I felt so bad that Rodney lost the chance to study all those ancient artifacts. Poor Rodney.:-( But, he got the ZedPM!:-D I guess that's what really matters, just not at the price Rodney paid to get it. All that whumped goodness!
BRAVO! |
 deblease 2009-10-11 . chapter 1You finally gave Rodney a fully charged ZedPM and you only half killed him in the process! good story! |
 Shellyq 2009-10-11 . chapter 1 Well, I certainly wouldn't mind a Season 6 centered on Rodney whump! LOL
This was a good fic. Interesting that Atlantis coming back would activate something. I like that Rodney's "dodgey" gene caused him some nice whump. I like why you had Rodney so intent on getting a ZPM too. He "didn't want to go back to being the man he had been". I don't think he would even if they were split up, he has changed a lot but I can understand him being scared about it.
Thanks for sharing the fic, very nice read. |
 Mechia132 2009-10-11 . chapter 1very good. it would have been fun to see a second chapter of the team taking on the SGC and IOA toget Atlantis back to were it needs to be. |
 Se-chan91 2009-10-11 . chapter 1Aww... I just love his story^^
Great Rodney-Whump and I so love his thoughts about being seperated from the others... he just want to spend his time with them, that's soo cute^^
And I haven't seen the episode yet, but I can they that the plot to this episode is great^^,
Hope I read you soon,
Se-chan |
 MarisAres@yahoo.com 2009-10-11 . chapter 1 Leave it to Rodney to destroy stuff we could've used all for a crappy ZPM! It would be different if it was for a way to build them or a way to build a better power source but but just something else that will deplete in an unbelieveably short time again was foolish. I used to think ZPMs were awesome but really if they are as short lived as they are in most fics and Atlantis most of the time then, or well just when WE get one anyway otherwise they last for thousands of years while holding back unheard of TONS of water pressure, they actually suck and are only good when used as a backup power source. They our ships use them to boost our existing power but don't rely on them solely. In actuality I think the ZPMs would have lasted far longer than the show and everyone else makes it look otherwise Atlantis would've been powered by far more than just three of them and also had some back up reactors as well, I'm suprised they don't as it is, just in case some of thier experiments got out of control like ours do since that is pretty much all they did. Lets be real those ZPMs should still have at least a 90 percent charge even with the wormhole drive adn honestly more than that. Atlantis was design as a ship and wouldn't be so powerhungry just to do things it was designed to do- I mean look at the Asuran's when they needed to go somewhere they just fired up theirs and took off like it was an everyday thing- and it wouldn't leave it's crew stranded everytime it went out if it was deisgn as a ship. anyway enough of my rants! |
 gebtkd 2009-10-10 . chapter 1 Great story Varda, it's so Rodney to be worried about being separated from what he holds dear. |
 angw 2009-10-10 . chapter 1Rodney whumping centric season 6. I like the sound of that.
I liked the spin on finding a ZPM and Rodneys reasons for him wanting it so badly. |