Review for "The Space Between Dream and Reality" by My Hopeless Romantic

Your story(ies) have quite captured attention, excluding that it's a collection of short fics and dabbles, the plot was altogether harmonic.

Title 8/10
Very captive. Creative and says it all. But the summary goes in line with the title, more effort in that and you've scored 9.

The story line 7/10
Your stories are original and very creative, but it would mean a lot if you have mentioned that it is a collection of short fics. Some readers tend to overlook small details such as author's notes, and would immediately be confused. If you have managed to tell me that each story was different without me screaming "What? How's that connected?" It would have scored 9.

Vocabulary 8/0
Your choice of words were good. You did a great job with the details especially using adjectives.

Genre 8.5/10
You did an excellent job keeping track of your story line, Romance/Humor, Crime, Angst, and many more. Each theme exactly matched the story.

Characters 8/10
The characters were great and well played. You let them express equal and right moments and never failed to take note of their existence.

Audience response 8.8/10
I can see that your audience loved your story.

Overall 8.2/10
You are good, keep improving. You might just reach the top.

OFFICIAL CRITIC REVIEW
SakuraMIkan12

You know humor, alright. I can't stop laughing at this one. What have you done. This is, by far, one of the funniest fics I have ever read. Writing humor is hard but you made it look so easy! And all of them were all in character as well! Natsume is so heart heart heart. Awesome work. :)

You ended with the beginning. :") Oh, Anna, this is wonderful. I read this (set of drabbles, not this story in particular) months before but I never had the chance to continue. I think it was a wrong decision on my part to read the last one though. Putting that aside, this is too sweet. You did an amazing job as always. I missed your stories (and I miss you!) a whole lot. :)

Hey My Hopeless Romantic! I love your stories, I guess everyone starts out with that right? Heheh, anyways I do! They're just so perfectly written! Usually I do reviews at the end, but you had a question on this one that I wanted to answer!

I perfer Luna as a friend NOT a foe, I mean she's a good person! She was only doing that because of the Elementary School Principal right? So thanks for making her a good guy (girl?) on this chapter! I know your done writing, but can you PLEASE try and finish: Somewhere the Clock is Ticking and Between Silver and Snow?

I know Between Silver and Snow is discontinued but I really like it! So just try.

See ya

Sally

This chapter is damn funny :P

pure love for this couple 3

"You don't know how strong the urge was to end the story with, "Mikan, I'm sorry…that you're an idiot.""

-HAHAHA! I lol-ed at that. You're genius.

ooh I like this one! and you don't write enough fluff, me thinks ;p

Brillant. Spectacular. I'm laughing my ass off. Way to go Natsume.

I am dying of laughter and I'm getting strange looks from people because I'm in the lobby of a hospital

Aaawww... There was always so much fucking chemistry, indeed

Lol just because he was too short he refused to ask her out? Pfft.

Thank you. Finally. A fic that luna is not a b**** in! Finallyyy! Man, dont get me wrong, shes awesome as an enemy but if you actually think about it shes not all that bad! Even in the manga... The reason shes like that is because of the goddamned ESP!

aww what? thats the end? TTTT i was liking that one too.. darn it! i hate cliffys D:

The review below was by me, by the by. :)