This one is the embodiment of Fallout. Damn, its scary how good, gory, and absolutely heart-breaking you made this. Seriously, most stories about Fallout are light PG, for the glory and the loot type stories.

This story, oh, its exactly what you get in the Wasteland. There is no happy ending, no good people, no safety. Just sick bastards taking advantage of the weak and people who are too stubborn to die.

Fallout 3 is the greatest game of all time to me and I am bad obsessed over it. So favorite writer and Fallout, I love this combination.

The newb is playing WOW and ignoring Supernatural... Grrrr... I just might go to sleep. I don't have to sit through this. Though the keyboard looks mighty comfy. Wow, I'm sleeping, its time. Night.

Cool

Alright! I think I liked this story even more the second time through!

I really love the world you've built - you make every character seem fleshed out and real without harping on about their backgrounds, for example, Mal's chapter was quite good in explaining him in an interesting (and brutal) way, and I thought the reiteration of of the line "bruising was just part of learning" was poignant and very effective in showing that he's a monster born from a monster. And that's just one example!

You have this great ability to paint the world with only a few strokes of your brush; the history of people and places are told in a clear, concise, and still interesting manner, and I envy you for this talent! This fic is original and fresh and you are wonderful with your execution of it. I am rooting for Anya and Gabe and am quite excited to read more about them!

Hey! I read this a while back and really liked it... luckily the title stuck out in my head. I promise you a proper review once I've re-read!

A compelling story with great characters. You've also really captured the feel of the Wasteland. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like that you immediately set the scene. It gives a feel of what the rest of the story is going to be like. I can't see any Sues so far, which is good, and I didn't notice any spelling/grammar mistakes. As long as you keep your characters consistent, this should be good. Best of luck and well done.

Appy

For as well-written as this is I'm really rather shocked that it doesn't have more reviews.

Man you really can write the evil guys. Although I admit I almost giggled at the serious part when I read "spittle", anyway the point of this was to tell you you're awesome:)

I don't really have anything bad to say really, so... great job:)

Ooooh tis is a wonderful story! I would love to read more:) *favorite* *subscribe*

this is a very good story. i mean this is a really good story. cant wait for the next chapter.