i loved this one short..great!

such a cute ending

please write a sequal :)

also i really enjoyed the story. it was well written and had a good story, but the onething i dont understand is did harry and snape take the time turner before or adter Dumbly dores death? (trademark of madime Maxime :P)

Truly excellent piece. I immensely enjoyed reading it - and loved the ending. Yes, Snape indeed earned his reward for all the hard work not just the one evening, but the whole year. (-:

Two things that bother me - was it really only two hours that Snape and Harry spent in the alternative past? I think they would have just spent two hours waiting on the Astronomy Tower for original Harry's and Dumbledore's return. It must have been something like 5 turns if Snape was also to brew the complicated potion and visit Harry's memories.

The second thing is you never explained how Snape was not affected by the Unbreakable Wow - unless it's part of your other story I shall try now.

Last thing to say - yes, I would love you to continue. But I really hope Snape wouldn't be to cruel to Draco. I felt with the boy pretty much in both the movie and book.

Oh, and a note that may be important for you - I think you have a typo in the title of the story (A Huanting Moment...).