 venus 2002-06-18 . chapter 1 WHY ARE U KILLING HIM?? this doesn't make sense, u make him out to be a psycho guy. he's not!!! don't be cruel, anyway, if tomo is a seishi, he wld have enough pride to keep living. does this take place after his failure to taint maika and kill amiboshi. |
 Shunyata Ryuen 2002-01-14 . chapter 1Ooooooooh. *_* This is a very well-written, immensely well-done fic. *nods* I love the spark of humanity you bring to Tomo--despite all the potential there, he's one of the only Seiryuu seishi that we don't really get to see the human side of in the series, and I really think his character could've benefited from a bit of that. Anyway, you've done an excellent, excellent job here. The writing is fluid and interesting, the narrative seems to be quite in-character, and...phew, the ending. I read a fic a few months ago that someone had written, that ended in Nuriko killing himself, and gah, it left me a bit stricken. But, this...it doesn't come off as something to be upset about, I don't care whether a person likes Tomo or not. Suicide, to him, is--as the title so aptly says--escape. You do feel bad for him, that he has to resort to such things, but the narrative is so well carried off that you know, somehow, that this is what he wants. Anyway, excellent work. I'm surprised there aren't more reviews, here. Ah, well. Give it time, I suppose. :) Keep up the good work. Ta-ta... |