Amazing story! I love how you write. And you kept everyone in character, the plot flowing smoothly, and your descriptions were wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Very good! Please do a sequel.

Wow, this is such a great fanfiction. I just loved how deeply you went with the plot and the little twists and turns. I'd be super excited if you made a sequel!

Great idea, and yes please continue with your sequel, when you find the time.

Continuing the story is up to you at the end of it all, however I think you should continue. School work and exams always take a presidence over everything else, so take your time. You may start writing it and then decided to scrap it, personal I hope you don't, but hey what ever.

SE-QUEL SE-QUEL!! you shoudl defintely do a sequal! i really liked it, you pulled off the AU very well, although I would like a little more information about what exactly happened to Spock, and how he got changed. Good story and keep it going! :)
Ari

I didn't think that i would like this story at first but i really loved it! I would love for you to write a sequel to this story. I want to know how things will progress in this AU. Thanks and please keep up the good work! :)

What an incredible fic...I think it was a good idea to make Thela die; a little drama is always good in a fic.
I would be interested to see how Spock, Kirk and McCoy behave under Captain Pike; Pike has always been one of my favorite characters.
So, hope you write more and thanks a lot for this marvelous story.

Out of the frying pan and into the fire I guess. Things will definatly get a hell of a lot harder from here. Still Pike is a good man and will except Spock. Pike will be the captain right?

Grief does things to people, and McCoy has every reason to be upset. Though I feel more sorry for Spock, this is the third person close to him to die. The first two were kind of his fault, and he sure sees it that way, but Thela, well that wasn't truly his fauly, there was no way he could have known, and Thela knew about the threat too.

Why did you kill of Thela? Was it so other's could see Thompson's true colors? If so, there must have been another way to do that.

Soo... Kirk tampered with it, then Thompson tampered with it. Kirk, was obviously to get a better grade. Thompson, I'd have to say either to harm Spock or make it look like Spock was responsible.

Behind every motovation is a secret personal reason. Like Spock I now feel pity of Thompson and his inability to deal with his pain in anyother fashion.

Oh, it's alright you don't know who the first ones are, they're really more trouble than their worth. As for 'B5', it's probably the second best scifi show out there, coming right after Star Trek.

Good luck to them all. Saddly it seems like corription is rampant even there. Humans need the help of the First Ones, even if they do live in the B5 Universe.

That's what friends are for. Spock could be dead or worse without his friends. Of course he wouldn't be in that situation in the first place, but that's also what friends are for.