I love the flow of this story. Perhaps it could use a little more description, but the set up is very good. Based on the movie characterization, and even the TOS, it seems quite plausible

Adorable back story, I must say- Kudos!

Very nice!

Oh, very nice. Excellent economy of expression here.

ah i loved it! very cute ^^ and logical ;)

This was beautiful. It was slow and it was thoughtful, and it made me smile like a fangirl at the end. I loved the bridges you've gapped with this, exploring both her love of languages and using that in your descriptions. ' leaning into the kiss in a way she rather thinks is speaking very loudly' and 'science being the language of the universe.' The last few lines were just perfect, in a word defined.

Your plot was not only enjoyable so much as your actual style of writing. You have a lyrical turn to your words, and it makes them a true joy to read.

In all, I was thrilled to see some new stuff from you - you have to be one of the best Doctor Who writers I have stumbled across yet, and your works for this fandom as well are quickly making it into my top slots.

. . . and I'm sounding vaguely stalker-ish, aren't I? Darn. I was trying to avoid that. ;)

Anyway (before I stick my foot in my mouth any further) let me back out gracefully and just say: keep up the good work!

Hm. This makes me think...[leaves to go and do a bit of thinking, as well as her homework]

Love it! Your description of how Nyota feels the first time she realizes she can translate is exactly how I felt in the same situation. I read your bio, so I know you've felt it too! :) I'm so glad that you've written so many stories. I'm going through withdrawal without "Descartes Error" story updates, and your high-quality work is satisfying to read.

This was very well written and I believe you've captured both characters very well. Thank yo for sharing.

Very nice one shot. You have summed up their relationship very succinctly.