i like this story

awesome! i imagine her talking to Mandy.

Its writing like this that seems to amuse me greatly

Just by experience you're left with the most exquiset piece you've ever written

And my friend this truly shows how greatly passtionate you are about writing

I can't wait for more :)

xoxo Rachel

aww...lovee it

I really liked it. It was unexpected, if you go off of other writing that you've done, but yet it was great.

I had a feeling from the beginning that it was more then just a story that came to mind, and that it was something way more personal, which is a great thing to make a reader feel. I thought that although it was short, you cold get a lot out of it.

this is roughly what I got, i might be WAY off, but here,

I guess it's about a long lasting friendship that's taken a lot of hits, or maybe about a past relationship. I think there could possibly be pent up anger seeping through the words if you read deep enough into it, and i also see it as a person asking some one to fight for them because there to afraid-even if they dont realize it-to face the changes that will come if what they have crumbles. I guess if you get enough into it, you could say that it's about a person trying to hold on to some type of a relationship that's slipping away because she doesn't want to face the after-math of it's destruction.

yeah thats my view as an english nerd.

I liked it. Logical. Keep it up.

I want to write like you.

Your writing is so powerful, and so emotional.

I fudgin' loved this.

I loved the 'Fight for me like you’ve never fought for anyone before'. Whoever she's meant to be talking to, fight for her, right now!