Wow...so much emotion was packed into just those last sentences alone...*sighs* beautiful, and I await more^^
Spirk-shippers unite~!

This is an excellent start. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Break my heart now...I never thought "what if Bones opposed the promotion?"...but you just opened the door-thanks! More please?:)

nice job i wish jim didnt become admiral and if eel bad for him but great job i cant wait to see the enxt part