Hello!
I just found this story of yours and I thought I firstly should tell you that I think it's brilliant and secondly remind you that there are still people reading this and awaiting thenext chapter. Now, you may not think I'm entitled to speak (and maybe I really ain't) on that matter, but please don't see this as endless nagging (for that's not what I intend for it to feel like) but as a friendly reminder and a carrot :) (Dunno if you use "carrot" in english as something to strive to achieve, as a small goal or something, but that's how I used it)
Anyhow, hope you're having a great weekend :)

I think you could call this chapter "The First Child of Gallifrey." Not quite a Doctor Who quote, but maybe close enough for your liking?

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This is amazing! :D For a minute there, though, I thought the Master was having a change of heart when it came to Rose. I guess it was just me wishing he would :P but yeah this is really awesome so far! Please, oh please, update soon! :)

Can we kill the Master now?

Wow. This story is so well written and thought out. Every aspect of a life in captivity is mentioned and examined. The feelings of all of the characters are included and explained. Everything ties together perfectly to create this wonderfully dramatic story. PLEASE finish this story soon! You have such a talent for writing and I am so eager to see how you will manage to bring every aspect together by the end.

I really enjoyed reading your story! I wish it had a proper ending but judging by the fact that it has been a year since there have been any updates and six months since any other stories have been updated by you I wont be getting my hopes up that I will ever have the pleasure of reading the ending to this story. I just wanted to say that you are a great writer and this story has been very well done.

Update? Pleeeease?

Brilliant story, and very well-written. I hope to read more of this soon!

0.0 By God, that was brilliant. Please please upload as soon as possible!

Great story!

Read this in one day!

Please finish! You master is super creepy !

I need to say that I just love it all. I was trying to find something good with rose year that never was and I was feeling hopeless when I fond this. It's just BRILLIANT! and it's more than just a good plot, but it's also full of feeling and everything has a consequence and people feel it! you just wrote a perfect story about how people feel in captivity, I don't have words to describe that... just... THANK YOU for writing it, and I hope to see more chapters soon.

Blimey, and for a while I almost thought the Master had finally changed... :'( more please *sniffle*

woah o_o that was intense. i have to see what happens next.

I blame University! And here are my suggestions, however amateurish they may be )

"Peasants." (11th Doctor-referring to what Craig's baby calls everyone besides "Mum" "Not Mum" and "Also Not Mum.")

Stormageddon. (11th Doctor-referring to what Craig's baby has named himself.)

It's so much darker.

From that Elton episode: When you're a kid, they tell you it's all "Grow up. Get a job. Get married. Get a house. Have a kid. And that's it." But the truth is, the world is so much stranger than that. It's so much darker. And so much madder. And so much better.

I wish I could tell you that you'll be loved. (Amy Pond.)

But the child is lost. (Part of the prophecy from 11th Doctor era.)

Everyone has nightmares. (Reinette epi.)

But your heart grows cold. (Shakespeare epi.)

Everyone lost. (10th Doctor telling Martha about the Time War.)

You'll end up alone. (Lazarus episode.)

I don't think these are exactly relevant but maybe they'll spark some ideas. ) Great chapter!