Hi
Just read your story it was very good. But please write more chapters.

I'm really enjoying this story. I look forward to the next installment and hope you throw in a Miss Parker/Jarod romance.

hurry and write the next part because it's not very nice to leave us hanging.

the story is great so far. i like how you have jarod with all his family.bye!1
amy

great story it really leaves me in suspense

Hey Holly that was really good, even though, i dont understand it, but i can tell good writting when i see it, good luck with this(p.s. anyone who gives holly a bad review(i dont see why u would) is a messed up person...have a nice day

Cool. I like the way you decribe Raines "slithering". Good word choice. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.

Thanks for all of the reviews! They're greatly appreciated. Like I said, this is my first Pretender fanfic, so I wasn't sure if it was that good. But anyways, I hope you enjoy chapter 2. I'll try to have chapter 3 soon. You should see where my really crazy imagination is taking this.

THAT WAS GREAT! YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITTER!

You have to continue this! It's good so far, and we need to know what's going to happen.

Are you insane? Of course it's good but hurry and write the next part because it's not very nice to leave us on a cliffhanger like that.

Loved it! will wait to find out what happens.

o.O I love suspense!! Please continue!!!

YES! please, please, please continue please!!!!

your just going to leave us hanging?! It's wonderful, please don't stop. Victoria P.