Nice story, just thought about check out what else you wrote...

I liked your fic very much

this is so interesting!

The more I read it, the more I like it.

Good story

Since you're my roomie I got to read this from the beginning and I have to agree with everyone: It's a gooshy great story. (:

Great story. Please write a sequel.

Liked the story, catch ya later!

Story got a bit confusing at times but the story was great. it was really well written and it was so darn cute at the end _

That was a cool story. :)

Yes, I'm leaving myself feedback. Just a response to, Euterpe's question:

Goku isn't in the fic, because I thought he was staying dead. I haven't seen the end of the Buu saga. Only seen Cartoon Network DBZ. I don't see myself rewriting a version with Goku any time soon. Though I have considered it since discovering that he was returning to life.

And thanks for the constructive comment about rushing. I tend to rush to endings. This fic could very easily havew had a chapter between 9 and the epilogue. I've just never written a lemon.

Thanks again. :)

good original villain, and very creative concept. although, i did think the solution and ending were a bit rushed. also, where's gokou? just wondering- he should be alive right now...

THe end? Already? You better post a sequel to this! You better or I'll...or I'll...I don't know yet, but I'll think of something. *smirks Veggie's smirk* ok. Pweeeease?

((Panny-Plan))

On to chappy 10! Great chapter! I LOVE THIS FIC!

SO good! I loved this chappy! I love this fic! On to chappy 9!