 daisy.insane-angel 5/3/06 . chapter 10Nice story, just thought about check out what else you wrote... |
 Ai8 2/7/03 . chapter 10I liked your fic very much |
 Ai8 2/5/03 . chapter 6this is so interesting! |
 Ai8 2/5/03 . chapter 5The more I read it, the more I like it. |
 Ai8 2/5/03 . chapter 3Good story |
 Debster 9/1/02 . chapter 1Since you're my roomie I got to read this from the beginning and I have to agree with everyone: It's a gooshy great story. (: |
 Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no Miko 2/28/02 . chapter 10Great story. Please write a sequel. |
 Rachel 2/21/02 . chapter 10 Liked the story, catch ya later! |
 Villynaty 2/10/02 . chapter 10Story got a bit confusing at times but the story was great. it was really well written and it was so darn cute at the end _ |
 Kreliana 2/7/02 . chapter 10That was a cool story. :) |
 deanine 1/27/02 . chapter 10Yes, I'm leaving myself feedback. Just a response to, Euterpe's question:
Goku isn't in the fic, because I thought he was staying dead. I haven't seen the end of the Buu saga. Only seen Cartoon Network DBZ. I don't see myself rewriting a version with Goku any time soon. Though I have considered it since discovering that he was returning to life.
And thanks for the constructive comment about rushing. I tend to rush to endings. This fic could very easily havew had a chapter between 9 and the epilogue. I've just never written a lemon.
Thanks again. :) |
 Euterpe 1/27/02 . chapter 10 good original villain, and very creative concept. although, i did think the solution and ending were a bit rushed. also, where's gokou? just wondering- he should be alive right now... |
 Panny-Plan 1/24/02 . chapter 10THe end? Already? You better post a sequel to this! You better or I'll...or I'll...I don't know yet, but I'll think of something. *smirks Veggie's smirk* ok. Pweeeease?
((Panny-Plan)) |
 Panny-Plan 1/24/02 . chapter 9On to chappy 10! Great chapter! I LOVE THIS FIC! |
 Panny-Plan 1/24/02 . chapter 8SO good! I loved this chappy! I love this fic! On to chappy 9! |