you doing a good job. It's well written. I can see the story happening in my head. I feel bad for 6, he being used and is seprated from the rest of the group to keep him focused. You are playing the characters well.

If this keeps up then an stitch punk will walk in on them.
Don't rush. you are doing well.

this is really good and 6x7 is cute!x3

You claim to be "a little rusty"? Nonsense! This is bloody brilliant! *holds up a magical plate* Hey, didja know if you hold this plate and think hard about a certain type of food, just the right portion of that food will magically pop up for you? I'll give it to you if you updaa-aa-aate!

Pweeze?

~Love~
~Grogie13~

I'm too lazy to log in... *hugs Masako* I had to have had the silliest grin on my face through the whole last part. You've got these characters down so well. I'm frickin' in love with this story. And 6x7 isn't even one of my favorite pairings. You do this wonderfully. Great job. ;)_

This is beautiful. Nothing less than the height of the craft I've come to expect from you.

*is grinning like a fantarded idiot and not caring in the LEAST*

I think my brain just melted.

Even if you're 'a little rusty', you're still a better writer than I am.

There are no words capable of describing how much I SQUED at this! I really don't think I will ever get tired of 6...

...E!
Write more! I didn't think the writing was rusty at all. :)
And one question: what do the chapter titles mean?
-Kimsa

*insert happy fangirl squeal*

*Big puppy dog eyes* Aww. That was so cute, and sweet, and romantic, and... Aheh. It was really good. I mean it. You shouldn't worry so much (look who's talkin'). You're a wonderful writer and you're not rusty in romance at all. Now, excuse me while I go read that chapter again... ;)_

D:> 6! 7! Ahh! omg, that's so cute!

To be honest, I rather like your idea that 6 sees everything at once in his head, as a matter of fact, I somewhat thought it was like that in some parts of the movie. You use excellent voice, your grammar is *perfect*, and--well, it's perfect. I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^^

~Love~
~Grogie13~

You. are. AMAZING.
You are quickly (and seemingly effortlessly) becoming one of my favorite authors. 6x7 and Seer? 1x7 and The View? Colossus (and hopefully, soon, its sequel)? All written so beautifully, so well, with such skill that it alternately makes the reader melt with envy and gawk with awe. Honestly, I don't know how you do it. I clicked on the story without looking at its author, realized that it was just spectacular, scrolled up to look at the writer - and you again. I nearly laughed because I should've expected it from recognizing the style.
The psychological depth with some of these stories is endless. It's so, so amazing.
Continue this, please.
-Kimsa

Aw, poor little 6. No wonder he's insane. Having that sort of stuff happen would SUCK. D=

I love your take on 6, I really do. I dunno if I said it before, but it deserves to be said again. I hope I write him half as well as you do. Wonderfully sad and epic chapter. (Yes. It was epic.) ;)_