This was so very sweet. Herbert just wants Dan's love... Even if it's through a hand-made undead bride.

Imagine if Herb had governmet funding and support, fresh bodies, no cops...

Hm, since you're a review whore, I guess I HAVE to leave one eh? ;)

You've superbly captured West's creepy, obsessive nature and his control issues. Well done on the character study, this was a perverse masterpiece.

Now write more. Tons more. XD