 UchiHime 2010-01-06 . chapter 1That was drool-worthy. Hot doesn't even begin to cover it. But I don't why, but when I got to the end I started to laugh and can't even figure out why it was funny to me. Any way, I really enjoyed reading this piece, good write.
~Itami |
 Starlight257 2009-12-09 . chapter 1Brilliant story.
I loved your descriptions of Cedric's clothing and his smallest movements. Also, your use of words to create images in the mind is amazing.
Great work! |
 elloshort 2009-11-01 . chapter 1I find this funny. The actors are th same, but I wonder how they really are suppose to look.
Lovely story :) |
 TahnDawg 2009-10-18 . chapter 1i really like your story
i'd like to add it to my challenge archive...if you'll let me
please let me know if i can do this |
 Girouette 2009-10-12 . chapter 1Where is Harry? You have put Harry as a character principal in the resume so where is he? You should have put Cedric in that case because I was disappointed to not have the chara I wanted.
Apart from that your story is a good PWP. |