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13th Disciple 8/19/11 . chapter 9
Beautiful drabbles.
XxPhoenix FlightxX 6/17/11 . chapter 9
Yay Starfire! Though, best one in this chappie:Truths and Lies _ Literally laughing out loud, good one! Yes, Jericho, Cy and KF are pimps. And BB does maske his pain. IT'S ALL TRUE! He-he, in the comics, Jer was a man-whore. Ya know, just a little. I only say it cuz it's true! Will be happily awaiting the next chapter
XxPhoenix FlightxX 6/17/11 . chapter 7
OF COURSE THEY'RE BEST FRIENDS! Sorry for the Jericho/Herald friendship obbsession outburst _; They're even better than... er, any other friendshipping in the cartoon! Man, I went into that one so confidently. I'll shut up and keep reading now
DiamondDragonDash-Pegasister 5/28/11 . chapter 1
:D It was impossible not to smile at this. The way you wrote Kole and Lightning meeting was very well written, as it's really hard to get two characters who have never spoken in the series/episdoes to react to each and be IC at the same time.

Is the thing about Thunder and Lightning falling off a cliff and Kole's dad experimenting on her true or did you make it up?

Anyway, faved/

-Dia
Linzerj 10/10/10 . chapter 9
I love these things, great job!

...Speedy is too obsessed with his hair, and Beast Boy should be banned from the internet. :3

Again, great job!
Linzerj 10/10/10 . chapter 6
Aww...Great job!
Linzerj 10/10/10 . chapter 4
These are awesome, I love it!

SLADE! STOP KILLING KITTENS OR I WILL KILL YOU! *eye twitches madly*
Anominous 7/10/10 . chapter 1
Lightning was stood at the entry cave to Kole's underground home,he desided not to bring Thunder this he walked in the T-Ship parked right behind him.

"What the-"

"Friend Lightning,what are you doing at the Pole of North?"Starfire asked.

"Um..I..Uh..Umm.."

"Ooooh!Someone's got a girlfriend!"Beast Boy sang.

"Or Kole called him for help,too."Raven said.

"Uh..Yes!That is why I am here!No other reason,what so ever!"

Raven stared at him.

"Anyway,we should go help Kole,now!"Cyborg said.

The Titans ran into the jungle.

Meanwhile,somwhere in the middle of the jungle..

tosed Kole into a sphere of light.

"Where the heck are the Titans?"Kole whispered.

started ranting on something boring,throwing light based puns in.

"You know the Titans will be here soon."Kole said.

"Silly Girl,the Teen Titans can't help you,now."He said.

"Didn't you say that the first time you kidnapped me?You know, when you were BEATEN by the TITANS?"

hooked the sphere to his back and started to walk.

"Yes,but this time,I'm prepared,I have a new invention!Called The PE 300."

"Pee 300?Are you serious?"

"Quiet."

Back with the Titans,somewhere close to and Kole...

"So,Lightning,why are you here?"Raven asked.

"I'm here to help Kole."Lightning said.

"Then,what is the emergancy?"

"Uhh..You don't know?"

"Do you?"

"Um..No.."

"So?"

"..Ehh..I'm was here..To visit...Kole."

"Was?"

"Now she's in trouble,and I want to help."

"Mm-hm."Beast Boy said.

"She your 'Friend'?"Cyborg asked.

"What?"

"Do you like her?"

"Well,of course I do."

"Friend Cyborg,I am afraid Friend Lightning does not know of what you are talking of."Starfire said.

"Oh,right.I mean-Do you love her?"

"W-What?N-No I-I don't love Kole!Not at all!"

"Yeah."

Lightning smacked into a tree.

"Smooth."

Back with Kole,about a mile or so away from the Titans..

"And that is how it takes the powers of its victoms." said.

Kole's eyes fluttered open,"I'm sorry..Did you say something?"

"The tordo-electrones of the small crystaline power source-"

Kole yawned.

"blah blah blah science,blah blah blabby blah blah."

Kole took a deep breath,"SOMEONE HELP! IS BORING ME TO DEATH WITH SCIENCE!"

Suddenly,the Titans and Lightning ran through the trees,"Stop, !You are out numbered!"Robin said.

"Yes,but I'm-"

"It better not be light based."Raven said.

zapped Robing with a Boy morphed into a lion and tackled threw a tree at him,and he dropped a small sphere.

"What is this?"Lightning asked.

He pushed the red botton on the top.

A yellow sphere swollowed him,"Aah!"

"Hahaha,he's doomed now!" said.

Kole,whom got out the sphere when nobody was looking,looked at this.

"Starfire,shoot me!"She ordered.

Starfire did,after Kole crystaalized laser hit the sphere,but nothing happened.

"Ha!My sphere is invinsible!"

Kole sneered,then she thought for a second,"Starfire,throw me into the yellow sphere."

"What?"

"Just do it!"

Starfire grabbed her picked her up and spun around a few times and threw her at the went straight into it,and Lightning flew out.

"Kole?"

Suddenly,Kole started to scream.

"Oh,no!Someone get her out!" yelled.

The Titans tried for hours,but nothing worked,then Kole flew out the sphere and laid on the ground motionless.

Lightning sat at her side,"Kole?Kole,wake !"

She wasn't breathing.

"Kole!Kole,wake up!Move!Say something!Anything!"Lightning started shaking her.

checked her pulse,slow,too slow,about five beats a minute.

"Lightning..Kole isn't going to make it."

Starfire started to cry into Robin's shoulder.

Lightning looked at Kole's almost lifeless body,"Kole.. don't die,please,Kole I'm begging you!"He started to cry,"Please,don't die!Please!"

Beast Boy sat next Lightning,"Sorry about your girlfriend,Lightning."

Everyone thought he was going to protest or something,but instead he held her ,Kole's eyes opened slowly,and she took a deep breath,her pulse went back to normal,"L-Lightning?"

"Lightning looked at her.

"What happened?"

"You almost died!"Lightning shouted,then hugged her.

"Well,isn't this sweet?" got up,"I would ruin the moment,but.."He walked away.

Kole pulled away-

(And you know what?I'll put a better idea in the next review!

BYE!)
Redtha 5/26/10 . chapter 9
Truth and Lies was hilarious, the naming of random (some altered) facts from the comics was awesome. LOL, internet.

Aw, poor See-More. Unfortunately for him all See-More/Jinx fics are just like this.

Arm Wrestling was freakin' awesome. These four need to be in more stories. :D
Redtha 5/19/10 . chapter 8
Aww, I saw it said Red Star/Pantha and got excited but then I read it and was disappointed that it wasn't really shippy. It was still good though, I liked the witty exchange.

All the mini-stories were good, I especially liked the ice cream one: "...Blast".
Redtha 4/24/10 . chapter 7
There needs to be more Jericho/Herald fics, for the very reason you stated at the end of the chapter.

In the comics Red Star said he likes jazz and since he and Pantha are a canon comic couple, I could see her inviting him to visit the team to hear the guys play. :D

Anyway, this (and the other chapters) was quite enjoyable. _
KF fan 2/7/10 . chapter 2
Very nicely done. Poor See-more.
Consuelo Higdon 1/8/10 . chapter 4
I didn't want Slade to kill a kitten D:

I love Thunder and Lightning. Those two are the best characters to come out of Teen Titans, along with Jinx, Kid Flash, Argent, and Kole. But I'm babbling. This was greatly thought out and wonderfully written. It's not monotonous, and definitely has the diverse and fast action of the original show. Good job!
xxgabigailxx 11/7/09 . chapter 5
yay! xD not that i don't like the other titans and bad guys but my faves would have to be these guys :D

any bb/rae?

what a sweet chapter i loved it! ur doing a great job with this
EvilGirlsWillRuleTheWorld 10/16/09 . chapter 1
that was funny and cute your the only one how ever did a lighting story so far
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