"Or cheerfully for him, anyway, which wasn't much by anyone else's standards and downright suicidal by Lee and Gai's."

That line. It killed me.

Good for guy, it was about time he got his very own Eternal Rival.

This was pretty entertaining. Picking a favourite moment is ahrd but i am going to go with;

"Hello? I'm evil. I'm also trying to kill him," Kisame pointed out. "I don't really care."

Very Funny

If Kisame had his cool sword in his final battle with Gai, he would have totally won.

EPIC!

Hm... Poor Kisame. LoL W

As rivals go, Kisame is a good candidate.

hahaha XD I died of laughter from start to finish. Kisame is my favorite character. I fangirleo. And I loved those rare moments in life that put him in front of Gai-sensei frustrating.

And although I hate parodies (because Kisame always gets offended), this is one of the few fics that make me laugh without feeling that you are doing bashing.

Very good contribution, and the semi KisaIta me out a lot of laughs. I love the couple, and well, I loved to go out and up the subject.

Anyway, great contribution to the fandom. Bye.

You managed to take a rather annoying, too long joke from canon and successfully make it absolutely hilarious. Awe. SOME.

That was hilarious! I loved it!

-GlidingOne

good

LOL! I died laughing! What made you think of Guy calling something unyouthful in a mournful tone? Sheer genius.

Thanks for sharing.

"I DON'T CARE ABOUT YOUTH!" Kisame shouted.

Gai flinched. "Do not listen to him children, he is just bitter that his time has passed."

This bit just absolutely killed me. Bravo.

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Oh, that was hilarious (Wipes tears of laughter)

Keep writing!

XOXO. ALIXIA