|Reviews for Coalescence|
| SherlockedinErebor 5/11/13 . chapter 21
Great exciting chapter, but there were quite a few confusing points during Jasper's last POV in this chapter, with missing pronouns or it was missing clarity about who was talking or doing something. You should go back over that.
| Crazy Female LEPrecon 5/7/13 . chapter 4
I love your story. My sister, Shadow Huntress, told me of your stories and cajoled me into reading them. I believe that Jasper would have the upper hand in betting in card games because one of the objects of the game is to hide your emotions, something that you just can't do around Jasper.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
| XxSparklesxxBrightlyxX 4/30/13 . chapter 24
That was a great last chapter and an engaging look at the next story that certainly I will be reading :) thank you for taking the time and effort to write this.
| XxSparklesxxBrightlyxX 4/28/13 . chapter 17
I just had to comment on this, beautifully written and so very moving. And I loved Alice's screaming towards Edward, very funny. I should have been asleep an hour ago but I HAD to read Edwards return first, worth it :)
| Guest 3/17/13 . chapter 19
Thank you for a lot of very good laughs
| Anearin 1/27/13 . chapter 24
I cannot even begin to describe how much I have enjoyed reading this story, words like 'brilliant, hilarious, moving, and spectacularly seamless' do not even begin to cover it. You have truly worked a masterpiece in this story and to say that I was devastated that it had to end is an understatement. I was most most excited to see that you have continued to spinning your masterful web that is the story of Alice and Jasper in another story! I cannot wait to read Rogue, and then to come back and retread this one, and perhaps someday the prequel to this one... Though I am more interested in their stories together I must confess... Anyway I just wanted to thank you for sharing what has to be one of the greatest tellings of two of my favourite characters. Thankyou so much for giving so much time and energy to this story. I have truly loved reading it and would recommend it to anyone.
| Guest 1/15/13 . chapter 4
I truly love your story! Your writing is so good that I even love the authors note!
| BSlover1812 1/9/13 . chapter 24
Great sequel and the Cullens were awesome. I just love Alice and Jasper in your stories and they're fun to read :)
| Jasper Wolffe 1/5/13 . chapter 24
Wowzers that was awsome I read it all in one day :D I'm hooked you are amazing at this :)
| JM 12/30/12 . chapter 24
Your story is truly amazing. Thank you for showing us the life of Alice and Jasper together before they join the Cullen. Really love the silent secret exchange between Alice and Edward. Coalescence is a one of a kind of story. Please continue your writing journey.
| MischievousFire 12/9/12 . chapter 22
I started reading Coalescence after I left that review of Singularity, and I haven't stopped ever since x)
I'm already at the end of the story, but there's something that as been bothering me... Are you a fan of Doctor Who? You described Alice's wedding dress as the description of the TARDIS from Amy on the last episode of the 5th season: "Something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue."
"The poem was complete. My gown was new, the garter from Emily's wedding was old, Esme's necklace was borrowed, and this lovely set was blue."
If you are not a Whovian, it is just an extreme coincidence that I really liked :D
And I just have to say that it was an enormous pleasure to read this fanfiction. It on my top 5 and I've read so many in so many different websites that you can't imagine.
Thank you for this amazing story (I like it more than any book of the real saga ).
| garcianayelly 11/21/12 . chapter 1
| Guest 11/17/12 . chapter 13
It should be. A film. X
| Guest 11/17/12 . chapter 7
my feels are broken CAN YOU HEAR ME !BROKEN,I AM CRYING YOU
| Guest 10/5/12 . chapter 24
Amazing story. Again. I cannot begin to imagine a better rendition of the relationship between Alice & Jasper, and what it took for them to finally be totally united.
I am completely in awe of your ability to craft such an intricate and insightful portrayal of the Cullen family. You posses a rare capacity to express the fundamentally important bond that forms the foundation of any strong family unit in such a way that anybody who reads it can learn something valuable from it.
Over the last few days, this fic has become one of the few all time greatest stories that I have ever read, and I doubt that I will forget it for a long time to come.