Good start. If there's more to this, I would like to read it.

that was...really good!

great job!

This is great! Excellent chapter - very good insight into Mac and his pain and how he is healing and maybe isn't yet. Yes, he could help Flack. And I like how you described why he hasn't. I wonder who he's calling? Stella? or Flack? Great chapter.

absolutely wonderful. You and I have come to the same conclusion that only Mac could help Flack get over Jess and you have provided a good explanation as to why he is hesitant to do so.

Who's he calling?
This was great! I loved your interpretation of how Mac would've felt on 9/11... Amazing job! =]