This is intresting, a very well-written subversion of the whole ''time loop'' angle.

Funny scenes.

Heh. This is getting interesting. :)

VERY nice to see that you're working off a "Hate the hate" approach, which sadly difficult to find at times, especially where Sasuke is concerned. This looks like it has some potential, looking forward to seeing what you do with it.

This is becoming quite lame, where a ninja trained from birth is dying from tripping over things... over and over again. Boring, if not annoying dull.

Muahaha :D Great work

Nice alteration of the Loop. Well done.

Interesting i can see alot of places you can go with this please keep up the good work.

Ah yes. Good stuff! I love how it's that he dies every single time not something like failing to appear at the chuunin exams at the right time.
Looking forward to more.