 Joy The Wifey 2009-10-13 . chapter 1 You did it again bb. Masterpiece!
VERY original yet again. Unique. It is so Jack, every part, especially the Christian one.
And if Jate ended this way, it would be nothing sort of epic. Sigh.
Love you, keep up!
Make your wife proud *bawls* |
 Lostbeth 2009-10-13 . chapter 1OK.
Here I go, I'll probably comment on this one for a week.
Seriously Morgan, this was even better than my dream.
I was listening to teh song while reading it and I had tears in my eyes reading it. That rarely happens when I'm reading something.
Its so beautiful.
The way you worked in her death. So not cheesy , but so epic & tragic;
I kinda hope the ending will be something in these lines.
And all the flashbacks were SO perfect and fitted so well(totally good for the video)
and 'Live together, die alone' being a constant in this story
floored me. How beautiful was it?
And you must know me well, starting a fic with '1.2.3.4.5' that goes instantly to my Favorite Stories Inbox.
"Two bodies, black and white. Death came and got them, but together they are bathed in light."
Oh girl. FF 20th OP for sure.
Anyways,
You're such a talented writer, I've told you a 10 times before.
Every story you do is so uniquely, so poet.
Jane Austen, take a seat!
See you tomorrow for my next one!
I love you,
and thank you so much for making this! |