aw~ truly sad! good one!

you can posted also under roy and riza charcters.

Though I hope dearly that this is not the outcome, it was a amazing and thought-provoking way to put it. :)

I must say that I really, desperately hope this doesn't end up happening, but if it does, I hope it's written as poignantly and skillfully as this. :)

So sad. :(

I'm being crazily optimistic, hoping that Riza's going to live. But if she doesn't...Then this story probably will be amazingly perspective in what might happen after FMA has ended.

Great story--heart-breaking, too.

~Cal

That was beautifully written. I was in tears at the end. Thanks, I needed a good cry :P It's bad to wish time away, but I really wish it was next month already so we could all see what happens in chapter 101!

Keep up the good work, cheers.

Aww, that's so sad. *sniffles* But your writing is wonderful, as always. I love the italic bits you put in there. -WV

That was atonishingly good, simple, powerful and incredibly emotional.

That was incredible. I was moved.