Can't wait for the last part of this story...

This is really, really good... Would like to see how this will end...

ok, i'm really hoping that winona and jim got picked up by nero or something. i don't like fics like that, but i'm really hoping it happened here. because otherwise, jim is simply dead, and that is wrong in so many ways. jim's not supposed to die like that, not when he is spock's t'hy'la and spock would otherwise have to spend the rest of his life so very alone without him. plus, the enterprise and the rest of the command crew need jim. so here's to hoping.

yeah..u need to finish this up.

mmm interesting, wonder where is this going

plz continue!

I'm not one for reviewing work by someone I don't know (actually I don't think that's happened until now) but I couldn't help myself. I love how you have taken the creative liberty to alter the new timeline even more. I mean, Jim Kirk, dead? You really have an idea here and I hope to expect more in the near future. Keep up the good work with this fic and your other works (I enjoy them all). :)

Wah! Poor Spock!

Interesting path for the story; not something I've ever seen before. Very well written, also - you did a great job of portraying both Spock Prime and younger Spock's emotions.

Please update soon!

Mew, that's terrible! A universe without Jim? It can't be!

Please tell me he somehow survived? I mean, the death wasn't confirmed, right?

PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!

*bursts into tears* WAHAHAHHA! Very wonderfully written, and it made me cry, which is an achievement in its own. haha, i can't wait for more, yeah?

Love,

Lady Merlin

Ouch. Poor Spock.

I'm curious to see where this one will go!

Please update soon!

what the hell? how could jim be dead! OMS so sad great job but still oms oms oms please finish soon

Aw... I feel soo bad! Poor spock! I can't wait for more! Great job!

perfectly written so far - can't wait to read the rest! :)

Love it. Its beautifully painful. There will be more, soon? Please?