   omnioptryx 3/18/05 . chapter 5Wonderful... I love the playful tone that you have cultivated. I look forward to reading Chapter 6 |
| R 5/1/03 . chapter 5 Good job, but its kindof drifting and getting slangy. It started out great, and has a lot of potential. Post Soon, Post Often! |
| Courtney-Christina 6/6/02 . chapter 5 Severus' eyes are Beetle Black, not green. But all in all it's a nice story. Please, continue. |
| PartlyFoxyPartlyGrandma 6/5/02 . chapter 5 Heh, Ceres is also called Demeter by the Greeks, goddess of the earth who watched over the growth of grain and cereals! Sorry, but I've been studying up on my Greek mythology. And I always thought Snape had black eyes... Thanks for updating soon though! |
| JustMe3 6/5/02 . chapter 1 WoW. That begining alone was interesting. Makes ya think. |
| Akimekura Amura 6/5/02 . chapter 5 Atheis: Green eyes! HE IS CETRA I KNEW IT!
Aeris: Wha?
Atheis: Green eyes! Muwhahahahaha!
Aeris: Uh...
Atheis: *shakes Aeris really Hard* Green eyes! That's a sign of being an ancient!
Aeris: Oh? I know that...
Atheis: MUwhahahahaha! Hehehehe haahahaha hoohoohoohoo! MOOOO!
Aeris: *shudders and cowers away from Atheis who is suffering a multiple personality crisis*
Atheis: *starts prancing around chanting 'green eyes green eyes' over and over and over again*
Aeris: Uh... Author write the other chapter quick... Atheis is going coocoo!
Atheis: Green eyes green eyes green eyes! Hehehehe!
Aeris: Please... I am getting scared... *whimpers* |
| Deutzy 6/3/02 . chapter 4 OK, so it's taken me a while to get round to reading this, but now I have - I love it! But you can't kill Snape! And do I get the Lord Of The Rings influence feel? Hmmm... |
| PartlyFoxyPartlyGrandma 6/2/02 . chapter 4 Noooooo! Snape can't die! Who would protect Hermione? Oh, yeah, and Ron and Harry! Write more soon! I'm dying here in anticipation! |
| Nutsy Snape Fan 5/28/02 . chapter 4 AHHHHHHH! WRITE MROE! YOU CAN'T STOP NOW! THERE ARE TONS OF PATHETIC PPL LIKE ME WHO ARE HANGING ONTO YOU'RE EVERY WORD! |
| Battlestar 5/28/02 . chapter 4 I love it! Can you pleeeeeeeeeeease teach me how to get html working on my stories, Freddie? The sea is attacking!
Sophi
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P.S - There's always a bigger fish! |
| anon 5/27/02 . chapter 4 You are evil. Snape wouldn't blow his cover or get himself killed. Hermione will have already come up with some sort of advanced magic which is highly experimental that shields the source and her companions with an impenitrable aura of protection, combining several of the highest and most poswerful shielding and protection charms. It takes tons of energy but last just long enough for the killing curse to ricochet to all the DEs and Voldie. The end! |
| Li-chan 5/27/02 . chapter 4 Me no like cliffhangers...will the chapter be longer next time? And no cliffhangers? I look forward to more. |
| Dragon3 star 5/26/02 . chapter 4 Noooooooooooo Snape can't die because this is spost to be a SS/HG story! ah a clify I hate cliffys please post the next chapter sooooon! |
| Raven Dragonclaw 5/26/02 . chapter 1 I hope you continue this! What'll happen? I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! They always leave you wondering... |
| Raven Dragonclaw 5/26/02 . chapter 1 I hope you continue this! What'll happen? I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! They always leave you wondering... |
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