 macadoodle3 2009-12-16 . chapter 1wow. that pretty much sums it up. wow. loved it. totally believe it. now gibbs had better have said it. ;) thank you! :D |
 alizaleven 2009-10-19 . chapter 1Gah! |
 Odainath 2009-10-18 . chapter 1I just saw the episode and this story fits perfectly. |
 ferryboat George 2009-10-18 . chapter 1Wow, very emotional for such a bitty piece :P |
 anna27 2009-10-15 . chapter 1 this was great i love the father/daughter relationship |
 Ryalin 2009-10-15 . chapter 1Lovely story. Great job! |
 Hermione's Shadow 2009-10-14 . chapter 1aww, I loved it, it was so sweet! |
 melzdog123 2009-10-14 . chapter 1sniff.
that was really well written. good job. |
 Harleyzgirl 2009-10-14 . chapter 1You nailed it. That's pretty much exactly what I think he told her.
Well done. |
 Broken.Bells 2009-10-14 . chapter 1This is great! Last night I had to seperate everything I had to do for today and see this episode, and when Gibbs whispered something to Ziva and I couldnt hear it (& she started to cry), I almost went ballistic... but at least this is something that could fit into what happened. Love it- really good. |
 Chebed 2009-10-14 . chapter 1Wow - that was emotionally powerful and I really could see Gibbs saying that to Ziva. It seemed like he had paternal feelings for Ziva since the beginning and it's great that he expressed that in this story. Thanks. |
 Peace215 2009-10-14 . chapter 1Oh my gosh!
This was very cute and intimate. To be honest, I thought the 'daughter' comment was valid. She thinks of him as the only father figure she's had, her brother dispied him for that fatherly figure, and Gibbs protects her as if she were a daughter. I loved how you brought it out with that one sentence.
Touching. Very touching.
Peace |
 M E Wofford 2009-10-14 . chapter 1The scene made me tear up and this little tag made me tear up too.
I believe he did indeed say something like that.
GOOD JOB. |
 aserene 2009-10-14 . chapter 1I suspected that might be what he said...that or Jenny would be proud, but wasn't positive. ;)
Did you catch the part where there in the Director's office and Vance tells him where the coasters are and Gibbs sighs and mutters "It's all upside down." |
 Ditte3 2009-10-14 . chapter 1Good. |