This was such an awesome story. Awesome job.

Hi there! Meme12 here! OMG! Shun has been thrown in to the past! Poor Shun! Nevertheless; it is a great story and I hope to see the sequeal soon. I hope Ikki can remember soon one way or another... Awaiting next story! Luv ya!
Meme12

First, congratulations for the completion of your story!
Second, please do continue. I can see you have panned a very interesting plot, and I like Shun in a heroic role, because I think he is often underestimated and left aside. Very nice cliffhanger!

OMG! You've got on the edge of the chair here. Can't wait for more. I'll stay tuned. Hope to see you soon!

Well, this is dark indeed... but I'm intrigued, that's for sure. There are places where I get a little lost, I guess is because there's a lot of characters involved. Anyway, I'm looking forward to see what's next. :)

You have a slight issue with tenses. You keep switching from past to present. You should stay consistent with one.

For a second I thought you quit thanks for updating.

update soon I like this story

More! More! I love this story! :)

thank you for stopping the LC refs

Update soon

AWW SAGA

I hope you show more of Shun's thoughts

Shun seems to have gotten nothing from the deal with Hades

I think you should tone down on the LC references.