Great story! Except is should be Son of God and not "son of God".

That's very well written. Good job.

Now, here are my thoughts:
The death of Jesus is my least favorite Bible story. I know he died to save our sins, but, as a born Christian, I'm angry at those who refused to see the person he really was. They were too blind to see the miricles he did. But he defied them and came back. (I wonder what the people who killed him thought!) Another thing is: that two thieves were crucified with Jesus. Only one repented, so he will go to Heaven, while the other will go to Hell. It's amazing that one thief who might have done terrible things in his life chose to repent so his soul would be saved.
Kudos to you!

I like this, it's very sad and beautifully written.

very nicely well written, I like it. May God keep you in his hand, and let you continue such beautiful work.

great story here is another review for you

Wow, that was really good, i aggre with the ginny person, I really hope you write more, even tho u already have 2 other out which are also good

That is very good, and I shall hope you write more.