Hmm... I don't often read poems, but I like Raditz and think that this is good. If you've ever heard the song Brother, My Brother, it describes them almost as well as this does.

i loved it! it was very good!

I really like the verse 'Would you torture those who also bear your family name?' That verse has alot of emotion behind it. It was very clever. The entire poem is great! You should stay up till 3:00 am and write more often. Here is an idea maybe how future Trunk felt while being with Vegeta for the first time hmmm. Just a suggestion if you do I can't wait to read it.

HeeHee, this is good, it actually rhymes, which make it an actual poem, I guess, What ever, it's good, but get the other story you were talking about out!

I like it. Most people overlook Radditz and his point of view...but your poem is still good! It's touching...*sniffles* Well anyway-as I said it's a great poem and i like it!

Very beautiful poem! Certaly fics about Raditz&Goku relationship are petty short and very usual (you see: the tipical "Take revenger!" plot.. and that sucks me) However... that phrase "Flesh and Blood", did you take it from "Wanderer" DBall doujin? This story is tittled in that way! Moreover, What do you mean with this poem? _Is it under Goku's point of view at all?

(Sorry my bad english, I'm not english native at all)