I like your story because it is full of humor and our characters are very alike that how we can see them in the anime.
I don't know if I am clear about what i try to say.
But, good job as your usual.

AW

“I do not melt,” Tezuka finally states in that matter-of-fact tone, making Fuji almost doubles over in laughter.

Best. Line. Evar.

Plus the kissing. ASDKJLSA
AW I love you. This completed my day.

cute n sweet ^_^

LOL!...ahaha... i like it!!...


-yuulovesme
(camille)

It was funny how the Dream Pair were comparing their partners to candy. They were accurate in a way.

CUTE !
So very damn cute! *giggles*
Thank you so very much for writing and updating this drabble! I was in some desperate need for some TeFu fluff! (loved the mentioning of the Golden Pair!)
They are so sweet ... *wants some candy*
I can so see them say these things. Eiji comparing his lover with caramel candy. And then Fuji thinking what kind of candy Tezuka would be.
And oh the conversation between Fuji and Tezuka in the empty clubhouse ... XD Tezuka is just priceless! ^_^
*giggles again while jumping off to read it again*