that was a great story! i love reading this...its romantic...and very friendly! :) i hope i get read the end of this...hope they get married...hopefully...SUCH A CUTE COUPLE 3

SWEET!

Muy bien escribir! Very well written!

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I really like this story! I can't wait for the next part! Maybe you should have them going to college?

Aw, well, I will admit that I am a little sad that you are neding it there but it is a good place to end it. I think you could continue the sequel with them maybe being a few years older going off to unversity or somthing together. Just an idea. Anyway, I loved this story and I think you did a great job with it. I look forward to reading the sequel when you get it ready. :)

as usual i think it's amazing sams dad kicked joanna's dad's overreacting butt in that argument it's sad for me to hear that you not updating so much but i'm happy for you xx kissedangelz your biggest fan x

This is cool! I can't wait to see what happens next!

That was great! I expected more arguement from Joanna's dad but I think you did a great job with it. AS for how far they should go, I think you just need to see how the story flows. It'll come to you. Good luck with your new job:)

hello, i love it as usual thanks for using my idea and mentioning me in the last chapter i havent been on in a while so i had to read two chapters.

Great chapter! I love that Sam talked to his dad about it. SO many kids wouldn't have, so bravo. I think it's great that he is going to talk to Joanna's parents. Should be an interesting conversation.

It's getting good! I really like it! I hope Joanna's dad lets them be together!

This is good! Keep up the good work!

love it:) you are doing a great job with this story!

so sad poor joanna if my ddad did that i'd freak and call him every name under the sun maybe if joanna doesnt mention anything to sam and he knows somethings wrong and finally she cracks and tells him n then their parents get involved (sams dad speaks to joannas dad/mum) and things resolve themselves when joannas dad finds out sams a nice guy. It's a great story so far i love it the kiss was perfect.