*smiles* It's beautiful. It really, truly is.

A great story. Very well written.

aw yay this made me feel all warm on the inside! =) especially the librarian at the end! =) i would love to see a one-shot of harry and draco getting drunk together!

That is truly lovely!

It's cute! But the title... the title of the chapter... it makes someone like me think of something vary different than what the chapter is actually about.

Hi Kayly :)
I was so excited when I realised that you had started the one-shot and this one was amazing. Your descriptions of Hermione and Severus were perfect, especially Hermione’s annoyance at “other children” and Severus’ running away from home.
Thank-you for posting this, I just adore everything you write :)

The ending made my heart warm. Thank you for the one shot, I'm looking forward to the next one!

i liked it :) i'm looking forward to more one shots like this out of the Lioness universe 'cause i'm not ready to leave it yet :P great writing!

Lovely surprise, even if it wasn't "the first" I thought it might be. :-) And no, I didn't mean THAT one, lol. For some reason I thought this would be about their first spontaneous magic.

I look forward to more stories like this...and I really should get busy and read WaLF in it's entirity since it's been completed for months now!

I love this! I'm so glad you're planning on writing one-shots, because I'm definitely not ready to leave the Lioness universe. I'm looking forward to seeing what kinds of things you come up with for this. :)

Hi there !! It's nice to read from you. If I've read correctly, I can thus safely assume there will be other one-shots following... ? That's real good news. I hope everything's fine for you. Have fun writing.

I love it! The contrasts and similarities between their reactions to their first visit to a library was a great idea - it shows so much about their personalities and about their childhood as well. Poor Severus... :(

Awesome one shot!

that was cute

It's wonderful. [:

Oh my goodness that might be the most precious thing I've ever read, in my life.

Thank you for that :D