you are the best dbz fanfic writer ever at the end its kamis lookout and korins tower

i like this chapter, idk why but i do

PLEASE tell me she says no

i 3 dende i am soooo glad he was in this even if it was only for a small part.

this story is great by the way

she is literally right in front of him

love this chapter!

... WHERE DID TRUNKS GO! AHHHH?

WHAT THE HELL!

For some reason this story just keeps better and better...hehe good job!

i really really enjoyer it but i just wish it wasnt so short for a first chapter and is there gonna be a lemon for it. its good for aa first chapter

Loved it

MAN THIS WAS FUNNY YET SOME OF THE CHARACTERS NEEDED TO RELIZE THE OBVIOUS

I can see that happen so it is very funny.

wow just realized i already read and reviewed chapter 29 and this chapter was a short but sweet ending for this story... and i could hear you while reading this... dont know why but yah... great story and you gotta promise to let me read anything new that pops into your head... well i guess this my last review (for this story) so bye

hey there laya loved this chapter finally got to read it... well off the the next chapter )