| Reviews for Cotton Dawn Longing |
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Rochelle Allison 10/14/09 . chapter 1woman, you write the most... convincing, viceral love scenes... ever. the romance in this was so palpable; it truly was *married sex*. newlywed sex. they're sure of each other, and so in love, used to each other's bodies and yet still fascinated. (the way he watches her face to gauge how he's making her feel, how she hopes he'll enter her immediately "like last time"). truly beautiful. in my mind, it's MW & his bella. 3 |
Dulcinea21bella 10/14/09 . chapter 1This was beautiful and erotic and heated, SO very heated. I felt their need for eachother, the desire to reclaim eachother. They had that hot intensity to join. Excellent job. I definitely need a cold shower now... |
ginab 10/14/09 . chapter 1Wow! Wow! Wow! Very nice. Very, very nice. Really, thats all the coherant words I can form at the moment... |
Twilightobsessed09 10/14/09 . chapter 1This fic was just great. Well-written. What a present, it was a really good read. |
Hcm126 10/14/09 . chapter 1I loved this one shot! It was very well written, and also very hot, which is hard to do! Thanks for writing this and sharing it with your readers! |
AnimeAngel41 10/14/09 . chapter 1good fanfic! |
Rosette-Cullen 10/14/09 . chapter 1Sweet and spicy. The cotton made me see this in the light blue morning. |
latuacantante4him 10/14/09 . chapter 1Love it *fans face* Is it hot in here? |
TheNinthCullen 10/14/09 . chapter 1Hello! Words cany describe how much I have missed your writing. This had all the sexiness that comes from your writing. Loved it |
ktsgran 10/14/09 . chapter 1That was beautiful. Just plain beautiful. Love set to words. Thank you. JPL |
my2galspal 10/14/09 . chapter 1*reader fans face with hand* Whew! Can somebody get me a glass of water? I'm gonna go stick my head in the freezer for a couple minutes now. Thanks for sharing Nina's present with the rest of us. |
SydneyAlice 10/14/09 . chapter 1Lovely, but your stories always are. Well done. |
MtAiryGrl 10/14/09 . chapter 1Too hot for work! |
Edlovesme 10/14/09 . chapter 1As always, this story is hot. The way you describe things is amazing. Sensual, but not smutty, sexy, but loving. It's just HOT! |
katmom 10/14/09 . chapter 1Thank you Vixen...and thank you Nina for being the reason she had to write this! Ah, I need some lovely cotton sheets... Kathie |